"I don't know"
"dude, what's going on?"
"i forgot my keys, hold up let me get it"
"alright, ill be down here, hurry up though"
""Be right back"
"You should get me some water too"
"didnt you have like 100 bottles in your room"
"yeah but i live in degraff"
"alright. whatever"
The the guy takes off and the other guy stays and I walk away
Fresh Foods
"Did you do your math"
"Nope, did you"
"Hell no, i have to do it when i get home"
"Aren't you from Virginia" *laughs*
"You know what i meant, smart-ass"
"Chill I- I know"
"Are you gonna do it"
"You wanna do it back in my dorm"
"Wow that sounded so gay"
"Wow dick" (It had the same inflection as what the other guy had just said)
"Yeah we'll might as well take the quiz when we get back"
*Then apparently he randomly gives the finger to him*
and they get up and get food
same guys after they sit back down
"I noticed"
"I couldn't be the only one to notice"
"I know they're awesome"
One of them gets up to get something and the other guy takes out his phone.
and that's pretty much where i stopped.
This is a "You had to be there" moment, it was after the game, outside of Smith when they started heading back
"Samford sucks"
"Samford ducks"
"Samford bucks"
"Samford stocks"
"Samford chucks"
"Samford lucks"
"Samford mocks"
"Samford blocks"
"Samford talks"
"Samford chalks"
I thought it was amazing because it was three people and there was like no pause in between each.
"Samford yolks"
"Samford hulks"
I cant remember much but there was a lot, I cant remember the exact order either but it went something like this. It ended when as one of them walked in and started talking about something else. I thought it was random.
This was a good dialogue, but the only thing is that I was a little confused on what was going on. I think you should describe the scene, especially the first one. But overall it was really good. I think the dialogue about the guys talking about the math homework was really funny. What is a good thing that you did was that you made the dialogue real, I don’t know if that makes sense to you, but I felt like if you read that aloud it would be a interesting conversation. I think that’s what makes a story really interesting.
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